The Animal State (Imagery, Allegory And Satire) Comments

Hi Nice to meet you after viewing your profile, i like your writings, Hi Nice to meet you after viewing your profile, i like your writings

Hi Nice to meet you after viewing your profile, i like your writings

An exceptional, intense and powerful with ironical metaphors

Fear, horror, dark, terror, misery and ill spirits spread Committing destruction, death in a horrible situation, Dust, dirt, smoke coiled over the whole atmosphere The harmless animals are quite perplexed, helpless They began crying. War, unrest, peacelessness. a fine poem, very descriptive. tony

Nice one

My god mind blowing satire with animals as symbols reminding me the famous 'Animal Farm' by George Orwell. Hats off!

They blamed one another for committing the crime, Brawling, harming, plotting hardened in them, A long conflict complicated and awful tangled Loosing the worms of crime, injustice and corruption; .....outstanding conceptualization. A brilliant poem with brilliant theme is amazingly shared as Imagery, Allegory and Satire.

The global reflects what you are, what you do. If you cry, it will cry; in case you are ill, it will likely be sick and in case you laugh, it will snicker, too...........

The virtues sunk and the vices rose everywhere Envious state of barbarism, terrorism inflicted on them; // exactly captured the barbarism of current world where every human are busy to make themselves inhuman; great imagery, great poem, impressive

Yes, they are human animals So, there are so many problems, They are mentally diseased And physically like ultimate beasts, ..... an exact satire poem

Great imagery, allegory and satire, fabulous one, opens humana' hypocrisy

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Wow you have written this in allegorical metaphorical comparison to the human state of affairs everywhere. The humans really did that the earth badly and destroy her with their selfish rapacious and warring ways. Kudos brother. Best wishes.

Might is right' / full of chaos / rules less / self / personalempires and states are being established (killing democracy) in the present world, yet they claim themselves happy, not bothered about being immoral, , ....... Powerful!

The whole earth seems to be so, but human world (for humans) should not have been such, that are the problems but humans do not realize it

The whole earth seems to be so, but human

A great allegorical poem, though I'm not accustomed to read allegory poem, here I have understood the allegory in poem, I think it is a kind of fables, the characters are symbolic that symbolize human beings, In many parts of the world legally or illegally happening exactly stated in the poem, Modern aggressive rules and oppressions are going many where Your poem is wisely written, I have gone through the whole poem,

Animals are far better than Humans (Cheaters)

Outstanding imagery poem, so allegorical and satirical as well, i'll read it more later

Finally, all the rules with ‘Might is right' were Established in rules and regulations less animal state. these are what unfortunately happening in the world now for some greedy, envious, unscrupulous people and their leaders