I take my coat off
I smile as wide as I can
I greet spiders
I want to shine
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why not? there are some similarity and difference between human and animal, even some times the animal has moRe value and better qualities.. excellent work
short and meaningful, need more consideration, spider and balm here used as symbols, in competence with the world of human being, well-done, keep writing and get blessed.
A very thought provoking poem well crafted. Humanity is wrapped with mystery like life itself.