Friday, February 16, 2024

The Angry Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind, angry, was shouting
sitting atop the hill
on a platform it made
out of withered leaves
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Rebecca Navarre 24 February 2024

Magnificent! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 24 February 2024

Ever so thoughtful and beautifully sewn! ..

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Indira Renganathan 21 February 2024

Such tensed moments do happen in life....waiting is indeed irritating...wind stream metaphor is beautiful....admired this write a lot

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Anjandev Roy 17 February 2024

Wonderful piece..... thank u.... dear poet..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 February 2024

brilliant Kesav Just love it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 February 2024

I saw her treading up-hill leisurely unmindful....pretty expression. Appreciated this magnificent poem. Top score!

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Bharati Nayak 17 February 2024

An excellent poem with wonderful metaphors! Angry wind and calm stream! Stream is wise enough to ignore the wind's howl and calmly walk up-hill.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 February 2024

So beautifully inked. Loved the way the beauty of nature is expressed. Nice share. Thanks.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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