The wind, angry, was shouting
sitting atop the hill
on a platform it made
out of withered leaves
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Such tensed moments do happen in life....waiting is indeed irritating...wind stream metaphor is beautiful....admired this write a lot
I saw her treading up-hill leisurely unmindful....pretty expression. Appreciated this magnificent poem. Top score!
An excellent poem with wonderful metaphors! Angry wind and calm stream! Stream is wise enough to ignore the wind's howl and calmly walk up-hill.
So beautifully inked. Loved the way the beauty of nature is expressed. Nice share. Thanks.
Magnificent! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++