Saturday, January 23, 2021

The Anger Within.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was young I dreamed my life,
would be a fairy-tale,
but as I grew I felt the wrath,
divert to pure assail.
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Thomas Northx
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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 January 2021

Most important words, presented in a fascinating way, more verses of this writings, lesser pains within. True saddest to ponder about. Excellent poem! 5 Stars!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 January 2021

as parents must grow up kids in a peaceful environment, not one with daily abuse and beatings. As kids they dare not to fight agains but once reaching adulthood, they will behave like monsters wildest inside. Kids must grow up in peaceful atmosphere

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 January 2021

A poignant write. Pains of yesteryears are instilled in the mind. A well expressed poem.

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