Friday, February 13, 2015

The Angel Of Tomorrow Comments

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The Angel of Tomorrow (The agonies of a little boy lost in the dark)

The angel of tomorrows light
Saw me shed a tear
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Geoffrey Fafard
COMMENTS
Kim Barney 12 October 2018

Very inspiring, Geoffrey! When given another day, what will we do with it? Who knows how much time any of us have left?

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Dawn Novus 29 December 2017

So true, reminding us that not one day on this earth has been promised to us so live exuberantly large, love large, laugh large. Thank you so much for sharing....and, I ask...What did you do with your angel squeezed day?

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Geoffrey Fafard 29 December 2017

Loza. Thank you for your comments. Wonderful...! With my angel squeezed day I hugged and caressed the earth that I then could see. I have been doing this to our beautiful planet ever since..... Cheers, Geoffrey.

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Tom Allport 16 May 2017

a wonderful poem of a promise to give you new light? an inspiring write!

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Paul Reed 29 August 2016

'I have given you another day' - how soon we forget how lucky we really are. Great poem Geoffrey.

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Geoffrey Fafard 29 August 2016

Thank you so much Paul.You hit the nail right on the head, we do…..

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 August 2016

And I'm glad to hear that your angel spoke back to you! I love the phrase and she squeezed the black night as if she were wringing out a dirty towel to make it clean and light again....at least that was what I imagined. I grew up afraid of the dark, so I felt I could personally relate to this poem. Imagination is a gift and a curse. Thanks for sharing your poem. Well done!

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Geoffrey Fafard 26 August 2016

Take a small child plus imagination, blend them together and bingo..! You imagined the absolute scenario Pamela.Great comments.So good of you, Cheers Geoff.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2015

And she threw back her hair Raised her hands and squeezed the black night There she laughed, there Geoffrey Look I have given you another day Do with it what you may squeezing of the night, her laughter and she offered another day...... all expressions of your poetic mind. thanky ou

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Jasbir Chatterjee 30 March 2015

The angels that we seek outside are really inside us...It takes strong will power to bring them out, as this poem indicates...

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Geoffrey Fafard 02 May 2015

Yes you are right..in youth and innocence strong will is born..Thank you so much for your thoughts.

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Kim Barney 14 March 2015

Yes, you should have trusted her. She brought you through all right. Keep writing!

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Geoffrey Fafard 15 March 2015

I should have Kim.. Being older now I realise.Thanks for the encouragement.. writing.. its medicine for the mind.

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Lyn Paul 13 February 2015

Enjoyed your words and too your Poet Notes are appreciated. Thank you

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