Thursday, January 18, 2018

The Angel Of Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Silence guided me into sleep, and
left me on the dark side of reality.
Part of me sleeps, part of me wakes:
I hear a low him of music nearby.
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Daniel Brick
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Searching Soul 23 January 2018

Whilst sifting through the sand of most poems on here I came across this diamond which shone bright above all others. The intimate quality it holds of quietly inviting the reader to enter a dreamlike state kept me captivated throughout. But this is no ordinary dream poem. It does not simply describe a dream for the reader to view. It absorbers the reader in the feelings of the dream state.

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Daniel Brick 23 January 2018

You have earned your pen-name with this deeply perceptive and clarifying commentary on my poem. You articulated my purpose more concisely and also more completely than I could do. Thank you for this layer of interpretation that will open my poem to other readers and indeed myself as well. CAPTURING THE DREAM STATE is exactly what I hoped in this quasi-surrealist poem.

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