Tuesday, June 23, 2009

The Angel Of Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.9

She
Fell asleep
Without lullaby and tale
Rested in peace
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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it's only in death that we are truly free..make the most of life beautiful tribute to your friend..

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* Sunprincess * 23 July 2014

...........the angel of freedom creates beautiful and peaceful imagery...beautiful write...

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Surayya Abbas 16 July 2009

A beautiful poem nice to read.

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Allan Macli Borges 08 July 2009

dear, it is beautiful! ! ! very touching and writen with truth...10

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Adi Cox 05 July 2009

I like the way this poem ends. It is open ended and invites the reader to ponder all the possible meanings for the word err, in context to what this poem is saying. Humanoids always err. to err is human. err 10/10

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 04 July 2009

DearPersian Nightingale, Its a nice tribute with good lmageries, short and sweet.Nice rhyming.I liked the portrayal A10 from me Rajkumar I'm still in Singapore but can find time to respond to poet-pals request for comments. Today I posted about 3/4 poems from here. Please find time to read, comment and rate. If possible tell others that I'm back, --Rajkumar

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Lynda Robson 30 June 2009

A heartfelt tribute, well done, 10 Lynda xx

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Rani Turton 30 June 2009

A well-written piece on this sad episode.

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Reshma Ramesh 30 June 2009

touching tribute.......well penned

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Surya . 29 June 2009

so she is in safe hand. beautiful voted10 surya

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Sallie Howson 28 June 2009

a song of our times...well done

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awesome tribute very touching...thanks best regards, jdh

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 June 2009

a very beautiful, refreshing, colurful write indeed nightingale... a great sight for the wounded heart! ! ! ! I ll pay you a 10 for this baeutiful peice! ! ! regards shan

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a very beautiful, sad and touching poem...will watch now

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Ravi A 25 June 2009

I haven't heard of this martyr. Yet, I can feel her life through your verses. Nice.

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Bob Gibson 25 June 2009

Her life was not pointless! she has touched us all she reached our hearts before she took the fall her mission on earth has been fufilled she in Gods arms, and he is uterly thrilled

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Vinod Kumar 25 June 2009

It is very Important to read everybody in the present situation around us, especially your great country, I am unable to blame anybody but the sufferring huge community`s faith is too bad, praying for her soul to see the almighty, thanks dear,10++

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Evaughn Gray 24 June 2009

This is a very sad poem, I hope everything gets better for you, others around you, and the ones you love so dearly. ~ Hazel G.E

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

A marvelous touching poem.

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Christina Clemente 24 June 2009

this is a very touching poem that is well written

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