She
Fell asleep
Without lullaby and tale
Rested in peace
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...........the angel of freedom creates beautiful and peaceful imagery...beautiful write...
dear, it is beautiful! ! ! very touching and writen with truth...10
I like the way this poem ends. It is open ended and invites the reader to ponder all the possible meanings for the word err, in context to what this poem is saying. Humanoids always err. to err is human. err 10/10
DearPersian Nightingale, Its a nice tribute with good lmageries, short and sweet.Nice rhyming.I liked the portrayal A10 from me Rajkumar I'm still in Singapore but can find time to respond to poet-pals request for comments. Today I posted about 3/4 poems from here. Please find time to read, comment and rate. If possible tell others that I'm back, --Rajkumar
awesome tribute very touching...thanks best regards, jdh
a very beautiful, refreshing, colurful write indeed nightingale... a great sight for the wounded heart! ! ! ! I ll pay you a 10 for this baeutiful peice! ! ! regards shan
a very beautiful, sad and touching poem...will watch now
I haven't heard of this martyr. Yet, I can feel her life through your verses. Nice.
Her life was not pointless! she has touched us all she reached our hearts before she took the fall her mission on earth has been fufilled she in Gods arms, and he is uterly thrilled
It is very Important to read everybody in the present situation around us, especially your great country, I am unable to blame anybody but the sufferring huge community`s faith is too bad, praying for her soul to see the almighty, thanks dear,10++
This is a very sad poem, I hope everything gets better for you, others around you, and the ones you love so dearly. ~ Hazel G.E
it's only in death that we are truly free..make the most of life beautiful tribute to your friend..