Sunday, May 20, 2007

The Angel In Her Shadows Comments

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Your eyes only lingered on her,
Nobody else.
Spare me your looks,
Just one will do,
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Marvin Brato 21 May 2007

Excellent poetry for so young like you, so much talent Dead Heart! Be an Alive Heart instead so you can become an inspiration to most people. Worth a rate of m10. Write more girl! Thanks for sharing.

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Guardian Angel 20 May 2007

wow! i am amazed, the poem is so beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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