Monday, January 25, 2010

The Angel Farewell Comments

Rating: 5.0

A rose blossomed in my heart,
An angel sprayed her tongue on my face,
I forgot the world and tore it apart,
And we melted in a fairy embrace.
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RIDHA ABDELLAOUI
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Mouadh Bakhtri 20 June 2013

This poem created a sensation in me...Carry on the good work

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Rim Rimoucha 01 July 2010

It's pretty good. For a poem lover, this would be one, I bet, of their favorites. You have a nice way of words. it immediately hooked me. When I read it, it sounds strange. It isn’t like any poem I’ve read before….in a good way. I think it’s because of your word choice that makes it sound special. I like it as a whole. good job, and keep it up! (:

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Dr.subhendu Kar 12 February 2010

And all my veins began to weep and cry, All the green became gray.......................utterly evocative and introspective through ingenuity, as the story of love meets its epilogue, well penned,10+++

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RIDHA ABDELLAOUI

RIDHA ABDELLAOUI

Ouled Haffouz- Tunisia
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