A rose blossomed in my heart,
An angel sprayed her tongue on my face,
I forgot the world and tore it apart,
And we melted in a fairy embrace.
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It's pretty good. For a poem lover, this would be one, I bet, of their favorites. You have a nice way of words. it immediately hooked me. When I read it, it sounds strange. It isn’t like any poem I’ve read before….in a good way. I think it’s because of your word choice that makes it sound special. I like it as a whole. good job, and keep it up! (:
And all my veins began to weep and cry, All the green became gray.......................utterly evocative and introspective through ingenuity, as the story of love meets its epilogue, well penned,10+++
This poem created a sensation in me...Carry on the good work