The Ancient Mountain - Haiku Comments

Sh ++t! .... 'I woudn't know a Haiku from a hole in the ground.' That is not an original (by me) saying, ....except for the word 'Haiku'. : ) bri

oops! .....But 'I wouldn't know a

Not bad! But

Wild and free deep in the old growth forest. I can almost smell it!

I feel I'm there listening to the wind. Lovely Haiku, a good 5

Such beautiful visual and feelings to this! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

Gives a great feeling of the great outdoors.

Excellent haiku! I can't write 'em, but I can sure read 'em!

The wind that sings songs of freedom into the deep woods of ancient mountain creates images of a freedom seeker.profound and beautiful

very well written--I find it a difficult thing to write when the number of words are limited--you handle brevity like a mere arrow in your quiver..5 stars

Lovely imagery of being lost in tranquil nature.5 stars.

Wonderful haiku with a very spiritual and uplifting message.

A most beautiful sensation and message with a natural and great breath of Freedom. Exceptional imagery and poetic liberation,

Perfect imagery. Deep woods in calm and peace with self and the ancient mountain the solitude and strong. Full ******

This is a profound piece....thanks a lot

deep woods+ancient mountain+wind songs = freedom, beauty

1/ How beautiful is this poetic imagery? derived from the picturesque nature, meets the past and the present in a melody and tranquillity, quietness that reflects the stable and happy inner side of our dear poet,

part2 this poem has two faces: metaphorical and realistic, both of them working well, well done for this wonderful treasure gem…

Excellent poetry! Thanks for sharing...5 stars