The Ancient Elf Comments

Very clever poem and beautiful rhymes.5 Stars for this gem! Thank you for sharing

Many have brilliant ideas, but their eyes still lead them astray. MISERABLE!

the poem has nice rhyming, but makes little sense to me, therefore I call it a silly exercise in rhyming. : ) BUT it is NOT offensive, and the grammar seems ok. So *** 3 stars. bri : )

'forsake verb Definition of forsake as in to leave to cause to remain behind forsaking most of our possessions, we evacuated just before the hurricane struck' What does Elf forsake? ?

Perhaps you are 'careless' in not making clear what this 'Elf' is and what it does, thinks, means to do/not do.

Well crafted and beautiful choice of words.

A delightful read on human imagination soaring with mythical and ancient lores. Mystical are these images invoking a charm of the past, that continues for today.

When you seek for me- look For a different thing! Elves the mythical creatures are definitely different. Loved the quatrain stanzas with rhythmic flow

The ancient elf has quite the resume. Not sure I'd hire him, but I'd love to watch him work. Nicely crafted piece, full of energy and dance.

My thoughts! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The tooth of oppression, The lip of desire! Beautiful imageries throughout the poem. Loved the lines. The snare and the wing, They honey, the sting! Thanks for the poem crafted and shared with us.10+++

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. Nice presentations. Beautiful poem shared.

With well images and imageries desiring for being and to do, to reform, .... well penned

This was just fun and delightful. I really enjoyed the pace and light heartedness

Well written in a quatrain of four stanzas embellished in musical rhyme and rhythm. Sylva

It feels like the elf from ancient time fell into the poet's soul, evrything emerged from the elf's memory, mingled with the poet, felt by us. Ancient is the opposite of 'now', they exchanged perspectives through the river of time.

My thoughts! Thanks for sharing.

a good descriptive poem of a mythical creature?