.......The Alliance....... Comments

hopes still lingers, toleramce still endures may a day bring good for us

wow sweet poem is this one too..10/10

the eternal battle of head and heart. nice poem. 'One will be hurt but both in pain' liked it. thank you.

Head vs heart When will it end When did it start Well done my friend. I really like it!

All they have in common is the craze To win the life's neverending race. Not they...................we all have this craze.........well written

Nice rhyming and I want to be part of the Alliance.

cheerful song! keep it up...

you'll travel in an undestined train. wonderful poem, well espressed ideas to convey the message.. 10+ Mari

You have written a wonderful poem, Aastha. I think it's too ideal that heart and mind join together to form an alliance. But some people do have balance in their lives. Great write. Keep up the good work...10/10. Naseer

What a poem...! A real imagination of the reality An honest message given... A complete 10 as the poem and the poetess deserve it...!

Never can they unite yet both are your part Yes you are right they are your HEAD and HEART Your heard will always play a trick And heart will always prick very innovative thought...u differentiated really splendid way..this s what the truth is.. really impressing... keep on writing...10 from me...