Friday, October 5, 2018
'' The Aliens Were Dense '' Comments
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As the aliens descended,
Would our ways be mended?
As their intelligence was truly superior,
To us it felt splendid,
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7/27/2025 11:50:08 AM # 1.0.0
" We class you as puss, You're nothing like us, " could you have meant " pus" ? ? " There was no golden pond, " ...could be a reference to 1981 movie On Golden Pond? ? compared to my rhyme schemes, yours are trickier i feel; i'll stick with mine! nice job, i hope all readers understand meaning of " dense" here. to MyPoemList. and i plan to include in my upcoming April 2019 showcase. thanks. bri :)
Thanks Bri, I like experimenting with differing rhyme forms the more difficult and challenging the better, but I've yet to master them, that's what writing's for I guess, I did mean pus, if they don't understand the meaning of dense in this context it's understandable. Thanks again for your many comments.