'' The Aliens Learned That To Their Cost '' Comments
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After being placed here by an alien race,
As an experiment to see if we'd thrive,
Their manipulation we began to outpace,
They never believed we'd survive.
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i rarely look to see who is 'online now', but today i did and found and 'explored' your site a bit; Bri Mar sounds familiar, but it's been 'a while' if i've 'talked' to you.
ok, i found these two of yours in MyPoemList:
842 '' We Do Taste Nice In A Curry '' Mar, Bri 11/23/2013
843 '' As Intervention Is What God's Seem To Hate '' Mar, Bri 11/23/2013
i like the poem, including the story and the rhyming (though some rhymes are a bit forced perhaps) . the poem is pretty clear to me after one reading; that is one thing i really like! i'll try to remember to read it again and perhaps comment again.
to MyPoemList .........for now.
bri ;)
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i rarely look to see who is 'online now', but today i did and found and 'explored' your site a bit; Bri Mar sounds familiar, but it's been 'a while' if i've 'talked' to you. ok, i found these two of yours in MyPoemList: 842 '' We Do Taste Nice In A Curry '' Mar, Bri 11/23/2013 843 '' As Intervention Is What God's Seem To Hate '' Mar, Bri 11/23/2013 i like the poem, including the story and the rhyming (though some rhymes are a bit forced perhaps) . the poem is pretty clear to me after one reading; that is one thing i really like! i'll try to remember to read it again and perhaps comment again. to MyPoemList .........for now. bri ;)