Friday, March 21, 2008

The Alchemist Who Fell In Love (Elemental Love) Comments

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Love is like the water,
the more you find ways to evaporate it,
the more rain will fall down,
the only better thing to do with it
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Geovanni Leaño
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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 18 April 2008

i like the structure of this one...and i undoubtedly love the ending...your title fits well to the poem...the alchemist...i remember the one written by paulo coelho...great write! !

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Lira De Asis 06 April 2008

the alchemist.. that's a good book.. and u've got an amazing piece!

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Alex Rios 22 March 2008

That was good! Of course! I love all of your poems! -Alex

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Blue angel Florida 21 March 2008

I enjoyed reading 'Elemental Love' and its comparassion to the five Elements.

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Geovanni Leaño

Geovanni Leaño

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