The Aim Was Song Comments

I understand it, and I Love it.

He took a little in his mouth Nicely written Sylva

There is a typo on the first line of the poem; Before man to blow to right should be, Before man to blow it right. You're welcome!

Such a masterful use of personification... That is what Robert Frost is great for

A little through the lips and throat. The aim was song - the wind could see. Nice poem.

Ya ok this poem is sHit cuZ.

....an incredible poem with an.amazing metaphor ★

Great work..............it makes a world of difference.

Inspiring poetry. I always enjoy reading such poems.

The poem is misquoted. The first line should read: Before man came to blow it right The line as typed makes no sense. Also, the original poem had every other line indented 5 spaces. It should appear that way. Hopefully this will be corrected.

brilliant idea, brilliantly written