Thursday, September 22, 2016

The Ailing Comments

Rating: 4.8

Strange how the dropped crockery does not break
nor reach the floor, and no one notices. Here in this place
of locked cells and of lines kept reassuringly straight
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Tim Liardet
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2023

A meaningful poem nicely executed. Five stars.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 October 2016

A work of great depth n maturity of thought. Congrats.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 October 2016

'Strange how the dropped crockery does not break nor reach the floor, and no one notices'...... is perfect line for the opening of this poem. It is very difficult to check the flight of imagination.Very nice.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 October 2016

A thought provoking and meaningful poem displaying fantastic flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing it here.

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