I left you all that day
I was half-hearted to leave you mid way,
But God had other plans for me
He did not listen to my plea.
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Oh dear! this feeling is painful but so true. I think, like mentioned in the poem, it is that is better to put behind us the departed than carry it along every minute; this would be sad for the all. The feelings of the Soul, is very beautiffuly expresssed. But God has a place in his heart and hearth.
This is such an awesome write Kavya! I enjoyed this second coming (going) thoroughly! This is exactly what will happen once the dead come back! They will be shocked to see how well the living have adapted to their absence and how obsolescent and out of place they have now become! Top marks!
Thank u Thank u Thank u so much Mam for liking this poem. Yes have observed this in general and i feel its true and also good to move on in life. But accepting the departed one again once all have got adapted to their absence, is gonna be difficult.
Nicely envisioned, Truly, our tie to the earth is a temporary abode and diminishes on our death but our tie with the Lord is forever. Loved reading and commenting on the poem
Thank you Sir for your comments on this write