Tuesday, January 5, 2010

The Aged Comments

Rating: 5.0

Now are my mind and body weary
Time and space have left their mark
The paths I took brought me here
To continue with aids I scoffed at
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Andrew Lunel
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 05 January 2010

The beginnings of this 'fabric' we call life, excites as we define or 'digest' our own interpretation of what this is we live. Nice and probing piece you have written. Reflective and meaningful are your observations.

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Shweta Kolhi 05 January 2010

so many shades of life in 10 stanzas.. surely a touching one.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 January 2010

Remarkable, excellent, and deeply moving poem.

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