The Afterlife Comments

I love how you portrayed your perspective through your writing. This poem reminds me of 'Death of A Moth' because in reading this poem it becomes inevitable...but some won't accept the concept.

this poem makes me not want to die...very good discription well done

this is really cool! I don't usually like to read dark poetry, it gets me depressed, but this is great! I think as long as it is good writing, any topic can be wirtten about and be entertaining. It'a interesting to read peoples views on the afterlife since we all believe something different.