Saturday, October 6, 2012

The After Math Comments

Rating: 5.0

When your heart first broke
You could almost feel every little crack start to form

You could feel pieces of your heart
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Tiger Lily Love
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Aria Siren 18 October 2012

When going through heartbreak what we need the most is reassurance of someone's love for us. You've done that for your friend while painting a bright future. I can almost see your hand lifting their chin up and wiping tears away. Lovely.

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Alla Simone 08 October 2012

And I'll help you salvage whats left of your heart Because for you I have And will always care That's my favorite line. Such a moving statement that contributes to the feeling that this poem comes straight from the heart. A gaurentee and concern so tenderly expressed. The best thing we can hope to accomplish with our words is to build someone up. Well done.

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Aung Si 07 October 2012

Great words! Encore! Reading your poems makes my day!

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