Tuesday, October 25, 2016

The Affects Of A Betrayal Comments

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The Affects Of A Betrayal

As I lay down on my bed alone in the dark
my heart is pounding so fast I think it is going
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Annette Aitken
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2016

As i lay down on my bed! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bill Cantrell 30 October 2016

I can relate so very well with this poem Annette, pure fear...the ultimate insult, every facet of what was security suddenly revealed as a joke on the one who was faithful, there is a calm after most storms but not this kind....you have penned your pain in perfection, sad but fitting poem my friend.

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Christopher Tye 26 October 2016

Wonderfully deep and reflective poem, sadly us humans tend to do then only realise the effect of our errors.

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Annette Aitken 26 October 2016

Yes..it is a bit deep Christopher..but this topic deserve respect.....it is a very hard one to deal with.....I know......; (......thanks for your comments

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