Thursday, December 6, 2018

The Aesthetics Of Symmetry Comments

Rating: 5.0

The perfectly aligned palm-trees ornamented with rainbows
Refracted from the incandescent epicentre of sun in the glass,
The robust male-body on the beach in his minuscule red swimsuit;
The fluffy blonde hair on the shoulders of an emaciated boy;
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Hazel Durham 10 December 2018

Wow! Outstanding write, you construct a fascinating scene about people in all their different stages enjoying the sunshine and nature embracing them in such a joyous and memorable way!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 December 2018

Oh what a fantastic expression you have made! So touching and compelling. It is really a beautiful poem on Nature, beauty including human being. I love much the following lines.... The fallen rusty mulberry leaves from tired Autumn trees; The bodies on the sun-beds symmetrically aligned on the beach As therapeutic beds beneath the soothing doctor-sun's hands: All in a spectacle of sunset, water splashing, and serenity. Beautiful poem.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 December 2018

A conglomeration of beauty from nature and human beings has been vividly depicted in this magnificent write. In a couple of seconds I was transported into a wonderful body of water where people and nature interact creating a beautiful scenery. The imagery is so compelling. Superbly penned.

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