The Adventure Of Awakening To A Brand New Day Comments
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I open my eyes
to blue blue skies
outside my bedroom window.
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The tranquility of Mother Nature totally destroyed by man's conveniently destructive invention. What a price we must all pay!
hey there Richard, life lived with houses corraling us in--can be miserable
The last line in every stanza adds beauty to this profound poem. To my favorites.
Beautifully crafted poem embellished with crystalline images and wonderful poetic expressions.
A great read! What a beautiful way to start a day. Very inspiring by giving us a glimpse of the wonders and beauty of nature.
Thank you so much for your comments--you are very good at helpful remarks! ! !
Reading this delightful poem again. Came looking for something new, but this is your latest, from weeks ago. Are you all right? Having trouble logging in again? I hope you are well. I miss you!
Cowboy, I am well--just buried beneath the book I am trying to get ready to send to some agent---terrifying new territory
A beautiful way to wake on a beautiful morning! .. Beautifully described! .. But i guess the neighbors helped you decide on falling back to sleep...
hey Rebecca, trying to catch up on comments that I haven't read---but this is a year old--I should be shunned
trying to reply quicker these days and thank beautiful people for reading me still
'Outside my bedroom window' is a great expression which speak volumes about your inner wishes. Loved it...10***
Like I said, you really get into the poems you read! ! ! ! Thank you so much for reading me!
Wow what a great metaphor you have used 'outside my bedroom window'...It is within your site and you have all reasons to enjoy and cherish nature's beauty. How well you composed they are neither encroaching your privacy nor disturbing you in anyways.
Hey, friend, you have a way with words in your comments--no wonder that you are a poet! ! !
An uplifting, heartflet poem that has touched my heart Bravo! Bravo!
again it looks like I have not read this comment before---I do not understand having not seen this for nearly a year--please accept my apologies
This is a very pleasing poem to read. The squirrel with with his bulging cheeks was easy to visualize, and I liked 'pilfered nuts'. Ha! Who did he steal them from? Seems like I remember a funny poem called 'Pilfered Peanuts'.
I do not understand--it looks like this comment is almost a year old and I haven't read it before? ? ? If that is the case I apologize from the bottom of my heart
Great poem, Susan! I especially love the last line, 'taking a slice out of something besides the morning quiet'!
Thank you Belle for pointing out what really caught your eye in this poem---you are really adept at delving under the skin of a poem
Thank you, Belle, for pointing out the line you liked best. tis helpful to know these things
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And Magnificently written of course! .. As always ever so many 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++