The Advancing Years Comments

A very insightful and wonderful poem. A meaningful message full of wisdom. Beautifully written.

Harden not thou heart For it may age thee fast Thou heart be still and gentle For the autumn morn is approaching with a bestowal Of gifts of bounteous crops To thee as life’s toilsome fruits.....there is always a silver lining..... a poem born out of tremendous faith.....lovely poem. i read and reread it......... tha nku dear poet. tony

Age is truly just a number. well done my friend!

Sweet or sour they may taste but old age speaks many more things in this poem about dynamics of modern age. Wonderful and informative poem shared really.

Wonderful poem, Deepak. Filled with wisdom and truth

Your voice is very inspiring and this is a very provoking poem. What a line-'age shall emerge a victor with ageing '

there is a common concept among people that being old we don't have any moment to rejoice or to do sth great......but this magnificent poem hides all these concepts.this poem must be read by each and every human in the world....deserved it..................10 on 10

It depends on feeling of mind. Definitely through dynamics of life old is also strong to sing lovely song of life. Very wonderfully presented one thought provoking poem. Nice on sharing.

Though the ageing process is long drawn and a continuous one, yet its realization starts creeping slowly into us. A lovely poem with lots of imagery and tons of encouragement for people who are sailing past their prime.