Tuesday, February 10, 2009

The Addiction Of Love Comments

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Ahh! ! the addiction of love,
like ice cream in the rain,
hugs to teddy bears,
pebbles in the stream,
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Reshma Ramesh
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Sadiqullah Khan 14 February 2009

*Cloud Nine Like a kite on the string in the air And skies above the earth defying Upward pull but string back to earth Stuck in trees flowers and green leaves Strong current of air breaks free the string Rhythm in dance step into step to the heights On bouncy of air when in freedom the spirit United with soul to let the passion wanton Beloved like a free kite on surface of wind From blue skies loosened into cloud nine In slow flight on my way one day and take me With the birds to the valley of love enchanted With out strings and loosened from all bonds 14/12/2009

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Fiona Davidson 10 February 2009

Lovely descriptive write Reshma...thank you...10+

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 February 2009

Love is more like chocolate I feel..

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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