Monday, May 2, 2005

The Addict's Mind Comments

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The addict's mind is forever spinning, turning
Bobbing, weaving, feinting, swerving
Reason tries to land a punch, no chance
The addict's mind can really dance
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Alessandra Liverani
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you went into the mind of an addict on this poem..outstanding write! well done!

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Michael Shepherd 03 May 2005

Brilliantly put, especially the third stanza. Deserves publishing widely.

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Alessandra Liverani

Alessandra Liverani

Wollongong, Australia
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