Thursday, March 6, 2008

The Acid Queen Comments

Rating: 4.8

She shines at parties, such a queen

Her hair all bright, her eyes they gleam
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sue crocker
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Rani Turton 02 May 2008

Sad, racy tale told with a lot of skill.

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Shaun William Hayes 17 March 2008

If only they could study this on the national curriculum! ! well told Sue

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Ann Beard 07 March 2008

Great story Sue, well written and very touching. Thank you 10+

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LOVEFOOL Aka 06 March 2008

This is very very good gritty and realistic.I write alot about this type of stuff i'd like you to read a bit and let me know what you think

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Coreena Dejesus 06 March 2008

Nice ryhmes fantastic read! ! Thanks for sharing.

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sue crocker

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durham England
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