Tuesday, August 23, 2005

The Abyss Revisited Comments

Rating: 3.3

Walking away from the ashes
I took one long look back
closed my eyes
stood on the edge
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Gainor Ventresco
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Uriah Hamilton 24 August 2005

I think it is a beautiful poem, the Abyss being the pain of failed relationships in the past, now promise.

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Gainor Ventresco

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