Monday, September 25, 2006

The Abyss Of The Poem.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

With hand unsteady,
I stop
at the first line’s edge of a jagged poem,
looking down
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John Tansey
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Fil LeBoeuf 26 September 2006

Yeah, great word choice for sure...especially enjoyed the build-up. ~Fil

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Goldy Locks 26 September 2006

this was very well-worded; i usually cannot stand poems about poems. summation of the last line was nice but i coulda used even another line to support it, being as it is such a pivotal statement.

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John Tansey

John Tansey

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