Friday, March 10, 2017

The Abyss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stared at the abyss and the abyss stared back,
Bringing its darkness closer, a never ending pitch black,
I ran as fast as i could but the darkness was persistent,
I could see it getting closer even from a distant,
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Daya Nandan
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Jeremy Willson 10 March 2017

Yeah the abyss is pretty crummy man, I've definitely starred at it but it must not have liked the way I looked cause she's been futt bucking me for years. xD great poem 10/10 you might wanna check your lines capitalization but that's about it

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