Saturday, October 17, 2009

The Abyss Comments

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And so I stood before Him and he gave me
The Look,
That told me it was never His fault.
'All the choices were yours - all the way through, ' he said,
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Neil Godden
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 November 2015

With a clear realization I turned my back on Him and stepped over the abyss. i really enjoyed this poem. beautiful imagination. think of it i stepped over the abyss marvelous. 'Look at your heart and soul, and you will know which way to go. how true. these are realizations of a life lived. thank you very much for this poem. tony

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