The Abyss Comments

Nothingness sinks Deep, so deep Where? ---------- We will never be able to explain what we understand from that point. We are only particle into the time womb...

nice one definitely thought provoking

Question that haunt us all. Where does 'nothingness go'? It feels heavy and appears to give us a 'sinking feeling, ' but how far can it descend? Can it also rise? Your poems are thought-provoking and expertly composed. Keep up the good work.

we cant help this eternal sinking into that hollowness...dont we have beauty to appreciate, , my view, ,

I am trying to get this, but at this point and time I think I am lost in translation.

Staccato images, pulsating rhythm and then.... the sinking, sinking, sinking - eternal sinking - perhaps never making contact. A dark, sombre image emanating from an enigmatic labyrinth we can't and perhaps will never understand. Making forays - no matter how brief - into that labyrinth to capture images and flesh them out is what true poetry is all about and that - my dear friend - is what you have so graciously done. Take care...

Nothingness sinks Deep, so deep Where? --------- Into the planck time, where particles relate to each others through magnetic waves that sink meaning and nothingness.

And then to where doth nothingness go? A very apropos title...quite fitting indeed, as your ideaology on the concept of an Abyss, is in itself intensely inveterating...The theories, and possibilities that blanket this topic, are impossible to validate, and impossible to dismiss....Are they science, or of spirit....Is it astronomical or theological....I have written on this theme, many times....as regardless as to ehat be one's belief or disbelief....it's a facinating topic that, well....has infinite material to write about....I like your employment of short cropt phrasage, as it provides a teasing lilt, of surrealistic ambience...which is quite befitting te tone you've set. Outstanding work, young lady! You continue to impress! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

A great truth so nicely and simply presented! Thanks.

The abyss IS time and matter - at least in a SF sense. But yours is much more interesting, it suggests a happy ending. Rgds, Ivan

where to? to fathomless ignorance... to resurgence... and to subsequent enlightenment... diving deep into an incredible philosophy. beautiful write, aabha.

heart when exulted by the essence encircling passion seems to razzle by the trainbow so deep yet impeccable impinged within as the butterfly and its beauty as ephimeral by the time yuet not luscious green a deep scar yet an abyss as when ingrained beneath the time when mystical.luscious green.......................wondeful poem while raving in the ours of excellence, i admire the lucid art of expression,10/10, thanks for sharing

'Deep, Deep, so Deep...WHere? Where? The Abyss' - Inspiring trip :)

Abyss abyss and mindfull fish down the cave of the abyss explorin darkness with no lease. take good care roger

There is such a lot in so few words. Wonderfully mind-expanding! F

A deep philosophical poem but on the ground of reality.It compels us to think with a heavy heart and mind.Complexity of this age can clearly be felt in these few lines.

I see where you are trying to go with this nice poem... It is good just as it is....but you can either the opening with a middle or add more to the end... Just advice, hope you do not mind...again, it holds up well as it is John