The Absolute Comments

This is the realization of ultimate truth as an enormous energy, To find the form within the formlessness To realize the presence within non existence...... Thanks for sharing.

This is one poem that makes sense with no stanzas, no separation. It fits with the theme of your poem which reads as if one's eyes are gliding through the page with no breaks. The words used to describe life creating energy are vibrant, descriptive, and even educational. I love the phrase 'An universal artist with the barren void as my canvas...' I think using the'I' term is also so fitting.... So you tell the story from the perspective of the creator, but also because we are all part of the creator... You have a wonderful spiritual focus to your poetry and this one is quite direct. I personally have little experience with the Hindu religion, so I've enjoyed learning about your perspective on the souls through your poetry.

From nothingness to Absolute, I am there.- -The poem very much relates to to Hindu concept of 'Soul- - The individual soul is part of bigger Soul- -ATMA and PARAM ATMA- - ATMA is part of PARAM ATMA.PARAM ATMA is omnipresent in all creations, HE is present in all animate, inanimate objects, .HE is the CREATOR and HE is the CREATION..Thanks for sharing highly philosophical poem.

My essence is simple in meaning, but hard to grasp. Engraved within layers of unfathomable Love..........Deep envision. A poem of thrilling expression I like most. Thanks for sharing......10

The poem is containing valuable thoughts. wonderful piece. thank you.

to transform my realm into an abode of bliss. I also dream about bliss I got once.