Wednesday, April 20, 2005

The Absence Of Black Comments

Rating: 3.4

I see her back, her legs, and her shiny black shoes
The way I saw them
For the last time
Over and over
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Michael Philips
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Scarlett Treat 30 June 2006

From the opening line, the view of her back, to the closing line, the sound of her leaving, I felt the emptiness, the longing, the hurt. That world of black does exist, you know?

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Morgan Upridge Thompson 20 April 2005

A nice longing portrayed here, M

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