The Abnegation Of Love Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

The Abnegation Of Love

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She holds
an archetypal view of love.
Yet succumbs
to the blandishment of sweet nothings.
Foolish,
To submit to an egregious abuse of trust
yet hopeful
whilst knowing his love is ephemeral.
Trusting
mistaken licentious behaviour,
yet forgiving
a pertinacious lover who
displays only
to his romantic objective,
a phlegmatic
and cruel view of love.

The Abnegation Of Love
Thursday, January 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: falsehood,hurt,love,mistake
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 16 January 2020

Looking for love can be a self destructive procedure.Perfect!

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Lodigiana Poetess 16 January 2020

You are SO right Kostas..we always hope we can find the 'Perfect' one but are so often blinkered in our choice that the reality is not always apparent until too late.. sadly. Thank you so much for your perceptive insight into this piece. Lodigiana x

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Shaun Cronick 16 January 2020

Beautifully written again and as always Lodigiana with superb phrases.We've all seen these peoplein action. And you've beaten me to the punch by 24 hours only your poem is better written and delivered Mine was a little darker called The Charmer And The Snake which is about a cruel selfish man. ! 0++ and added to my oxymoron treasure chest.

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Lodigiana Poetess 16 January 2020

We have indeed known people like this...unfortunately! I cant wait to read your new work Shaun you are the master of the deep and dark..so will look forward in anticipation..Lodigiana x

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