The Abandoned Pub Comments

Well written.. The comparison of the world with an abandoned pub seems pretty appropriate and composition is fine too... Thanks Sina..

Great write, but for my liking, too many words. Loved it. Peace.

Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem.

Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem.....