Monday, August 27, 2018

The Abandoned Field (A Modified Terza Rima) Comments

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His house a pile of rubble, stones
A secret man not much for talk
My neighbor near who died alone
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Chris Embrick
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Captain Cur 09 September 2018

Giving life to that which was desolate and neglected and giving much joy to both your daughter and yourself. Sounds you purchased that land more out of love than out of greed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 August 2018

A wonderful poem on nature. Very heartwarming. Great imagery. Enjoyed reading it.10++++

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