The Abandoned Field (A Modified Terza Rima) Poem by Chris Embrick

The Abandoned Field (A Modified Terza Rima)



His house a pile of rubble, stones
A secret man not much for talk
My neighbor near who died alone

Twice I passed his field each day
A piece of land beside my own
A sloping field in wild array

Once lush and green behind the gate
Years I desired, though out of greed
The eyesore next to my estate

The land I thought not worth the weeds
Still I bid fair the day it sold
For its acres I had no need

But for my daughter's sheer delight
A place to dance with butterflies
Under Autumn skies sunny, bright

The mem'ries dear when I grow old
My field of weeds bloomed flowers gold.

Monday, August 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: greed,nature,neighbors,relationships,daughter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 09 September 2018

Giving life to that which was desolate and neglected and giving much joy to both your daughter and yourself. Sounds you purchased that land more out of love than out of greed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 August 2018

A wonderful poem on nature. Very heartwarming. Great imagery. Enjoyed reading it.10++++

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Chris Embrick

Chris Embrick

Commerce, Georgia
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