The Abandoned City Comments

3) the opening line sets the mood " Dust Settles In The Cracks! "… A beauty

2) exquisite poetry. The soft melody and rhythm and rhyme accentuate the melancholy mood of the poem. Loved it. Top score and added to MyFavourites

Hi dear poet! You have dug up an ocean of the loss and destruction caused by wars, without saying so much. A poignant survey of the ruins the mankind will eventually face if he continues with the chaos. Through the tearful eyes of an innocent hapless child…..