Saturday, May 9, 2009

The 8th Color Comments

Rating: 5.0

In sleep's depths
I dreamed...

Scenes of beauty
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Afzal Shauq
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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 October 2009

I like it very much. Really charming. I read it with pleasure.10v. Greetings and thank you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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an imaginative poem! ! ! let me guess! ! ! you are the 8th color of the rainbow! ! ! is it eh? ? ? I say: “a Great IMAGINATION” I touched the rainbow in your poem, I touched this amazing phenomenon with 8 colors … full of optimism these words “and the eighth color, among them was me” sweet thoughts! ! ! keep up! ! ! yours eNiGMa

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Merna Ibrahim 10 May 2009

WOW! ! , I really like this poem, and especially this verse'and the eighth color among them was me'........Good work..10/10 Merna

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