Monday, May 20, 2019

The 61 Years Old Kid Comments

Rating: 4.0

Like a flash you emerged as the third child
then I took your leave
Years lapsed you grew
about you I never knew
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 May 2019

Time will heal! ! ! ! No no kids. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prabir Gayen 21 May 2019

Like a flash you emerged as the third child then I took your leave Years lapsed you grew about you I never knew

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Prabir Gayen 21 May 2019

Got married had kids twins a girl and a boy all were happy but your doctor hubby said one is mine, the other's whose he abused and kicked you Out of court you separated then what was there to do

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Prabir Gayen 21 May 2019

Nothing to save your image and protection your brother got you married to his subordinate No no kids No legal hassles Life again moved on

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Prabir Gayen 21 May 2019

The other day they told me you had been widowed Later, after a few days you had become a grand mom Life came to a stand still

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Prabir Gayen 21 May 2019

I hadn't met you dear niece all I can say now move on time again will heal ‘twill my dear you are just a kid @61 for me

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Srijita Mondal 21 May 2019

Time heals pain..last para is too beautiful..I must quote: - " I hadn't met you dear niece all I can say now move on time again will heal ‘twill my dear you are just a kid @61 for me " 10+ vote from me

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Thank you for your kindness and generosity SM

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Akhtar Jawad 20 May 2019

Your note, Another factual poem, " ; if so, it's an amazing story so nicely narrated in a an interesting poem.

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when a poem is factual I accept responsibility like Mom's Smiles and Meet you On the Other Side and Time's Oblivion Sir thank you..KINDNESS FOR KIND WORDS

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