The 5th Dimension Comments

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Immediately caught mine attention from beginning to end. Fascinatingly beautiful!

But, I need to say, super poem.5 *s

2. While repeating some lines and words in the poem add to its aesthetic beauty, some look superfluous. We need to be very careful in using this as a tool.

Lovely poignant poem. Faintly philosophical, but largely exhorting. There is one suggestion: The very first stanza is adequately suggestive of "Pandora's Box". So the reference to it later on in the poem could be avoided.