Tuesday, September 20, 2005

The 2nd Half Comments

Rating: 4.0

The first half is now winding down
Those days are done & past
It spanned a gap of 40 years
Yet time went oh so fast
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sam furman
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Ernestine Northover 20 September 2005

This is a very nice poem Sam. I like poems that rhyme and this one flows nicely. I hope you succeed with your second half, I think you've got the stamina for it! Sincerely Ernestine Northover.

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