Wednesday, March 14, 2012

The 27th Olympiad (2000) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Olympics are here in my town
The torch went past my house
People lined the street
Old and new, young and weary
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Danny Draper
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Wahab Abdul 19 March 2012

Very good narrative poem indeed, the language the words, the phrases and the epithets are proper than appropriate, the flow of the is an excellent one too..........a really nice poem, i add it as my best narrative poem.... ''Spoken, sighed, whispered''.....this the line bears the trait and characteristics of the modern poetry as the words are used without connectivity with complete sentences, i love the poem.

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Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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