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I want to see a thaw, a drip, drip, drip on the morning leaves,
Rain writing on the window panes, a life-story of falling.
I want to see whiteness turn clear again
Until the road is a stretching liquid mirror,
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Yes... very nice, Sean... I like it. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. dan
This is very poetic and the first stanza is particuarly beautiful.
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7/28/2025 6:04:52 AM # 1.0.0
Oh Oh Oh. Beautiful. Even if one couldn't relate with the so sweet subject matter, its just constructed so well, and the imagery is beautiful. Regards Lauren