Sunday, May 7, 2023

That's What Life Is For Comments

Rating: ★4.0

As i sit here and write about you,
It's hard to hold back the tears,
For memories take me back again,
To a time that seems oh so clear.
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Jayne Louise Davies
Memories childhood
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Bri Edwards 07 May 2023

p.s. I approve of you using a 5th line in last stanza. ;))))))))))))

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Bri Edwards 07 May 2023

Gee, I was wonderin' what life was for. 4 stars bri : )

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Bri Edwards 07 May 2023

Jayne, i KNOW you are just WAITING to point out your 'typo' in line 12. i'm surprised my old eyes noticed it. bri ;) i think i'll start to 'follow' you here, now that i know HOW (to do it) .

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Jayne Louise Davies 08 May 2023

Not sure where Bri? Please enlighten me : )

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 May 2023

Again a beautiful poem from your pen. Loved it. Thanks.

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Jayne Louise Davies 08 May 2023

Thanks for your kind comment Anil x Much appreciated.

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
Jayne Louise Davies
Jayne Louise Davies
Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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