Thursday, March 15, 2007

Thats It, I'M Done Comments

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THATS IT
i'm done
i can't take this anymore
THATS IT
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Wandering Scarlet 27 May 2008

great poem, but a bit of advice... try being more careful with rhymes, as well as possibly keeping every third line at a consistent number of syllabols

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Cheyenne Ashley 24 March 2007

I like the surprise at the end. You would think that you are going to kill him but you kil yourself. Nicely written.

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cherry smith 17 March 2007

i love this poem....

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