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That Young Guy Has Skill Comments

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That Young Guy Has Skill

I'm standing outside
In the pouring rain
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Edwin Tanguma
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Terry Craddock 23 September 2020

Cold Hard Winter Rain ice enters life rains hard heavy cold wet when it rains it pours worse with cold hard winter rain Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Edwin Tanguma. Dedicated to the poet Edwin Tanguma.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 September 2019

the path yes; the path you can make the path and can take, walk on it as your… but yeah; this I from the other rather better to mine as the owner............! !

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Chinedu Dike 17 June 2018

A good creation embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Edwin.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

When The Cold Rain Comes life rains hard heavy chores when it rains it thunderclap pours worse with cold hard winter rain ice rain stings flesh like needle pain when a bright sun comes out it shines life is easier outside when a warm sun shines Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

Melting Heavy Black Rainclouds Dissolving melting overhead heavy cloud blackness melting water saturated vapour darkness melting dew point stretched tight clouds Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

Rain Droplet Diversity Stories in sheets downpouring driven wind rains in gravity freefall earth diving liquid droplets in earth impact falling hitting splash waters Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

Dry Land Flood Transition Recipes wet lands past dry suddenly sodden floods wet rain fed rivers overflowing burst banks when a cloudburst rainstorm angry passes Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

A World Transformed In Soup Grey Mist Fog in the mist fog light is feast swallowed water haze hides sharp distance visibility a world transformed in soup grey mist fog Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

Treasure Hunt Jewels Bestowed In Past Mist Dark Corners sun mist shine through eaten vapour time mist fog banks day dawns late in countryside cityscape sun warmed scenes treasure hunt jewels are bestowed in past mist dark corners Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

Shimmer Water Droplet Diamonds glittering sparkling diamonds shimmer water droplet diamonds water glistening on spider webs Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

Mist Repainted Common Places seek out spectrum multiple treasures pot of gold sunlit location rainbows hide in mist repainted common places Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 31 January 2017

Land Birth Renewal Greetings land birth renewal greets happy child dancing eyes land birth renewal greets scan scene painting eyes land birth renewal greets writer poet whispering eyes Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'That Young Guy Has Skill' by the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi. Dedicated to the poet Dagesh.1theappleofmyfathersi.

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Terry Craddock 11 January 2017

'I'm standing outside In the pouring rain My heart is broken And I'm filled with pain' life rains hard heavy, when it rains it pours, worse with cold hard winter rain

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