Friday, September 20, 2019

That Which We Seek Comments

Rating: 5.0

More rare than Gold
"True Love"

So hard to find,
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Darwin Henry Beuning
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Bri Edwards 17 July 2022

What the heck is 'true love' or just plain 'love' anyway? ? ? ? It is a convenient, short word, but leaves a lot unsaid. I feel 'actions speak louder than words', but some words can hurt more than words.

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Bri Edwards 17 July 2022

One does NOT have to die alone, even if without a 'true love', which I may or may not have had in four marriages.

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Bri Edwards 17 July 2022

I read a while ago. Now to comment: I think 'shipwrecks'.

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Kim Barney 05 October 2019

Thought I had left a comment on this one already, but I don't see it! Anyway, great poem! Nothing worse than dying alone, I would think.

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Valsa George 03 October 2019

We all long for real love.....! The feeling that we are all alone without anybody to share our pain or partake of our joy is the greatest misery in life! Fortunate are those who find a true companion! A great write!

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Darwin Henry Beuning 04 October 2019

Valsa, Thank you for your kind comments! ! I have been married to my Thailand wife now for 43 years and have had much happiness. Without her I would not exist. Best to you and yours! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2019

True love is more rare than Gold. It is hard to find and to keep. We all yearn for that special someone. This feeling has felt deeply for " Ship wrecks on the shores of life' held on 3: 15am,20 September 2019. A heart touching poem has been so astutely delineated by you dear Drawin. Thanks for sharing.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 24 September 2019

Kumarmani, Thank you for you kind comments.

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